May 22nd, 2003

tv // lbd // shoulder touch

Tale of the Grudging Muse Part II

Now that I think about it, I'm not sure if I'm done with Chapter One. I found what I thought was a nice cliffhangery line of dialogue to use prior to a scene break, but now I think the scene needs to continue in order to have the full effect. The scene itself is a bit of a cliche, but I'll just have to find some way to make it original.
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