okayStill working on Chapter Two, currently at page 33. It's coming along nicely, although I can already see where timing is going to start to become a problem. I have scenes going on on two different planets, with two different time tables. I'm going to have to do what I didn't do with Sleepers and keep good records from the beginning about what happens and when.
Trying to figure out when to first introduce the villian. I don't want to do it too early, but I don't want to wait too long either.
