Notice I said 'written,' not 'well-written,' but ya know... details.
I'm a little worried that I'm jumping around in the timeline too much. I think I've actually gone from "This is a sequel to WBP and if you haven't read it you're going to be pretty lost" to "if you haven't read it recently, don't even bother." I didn't try to make them so interconnected, it just... happened.
Speaking of happening, the Tony/Pepper subplot is also still trying to happen. Even though Pepper hasn't actually appeared 'on screen.' And I don't know if it's brilliant or just totally a rotten idea that's going to come out of nowhere and detract from the story and confuse everybody.