Alli Snow (allisnow) wrote,
Alli Snow
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*Headdesk*, revisited

So, somehow I managed to replot the stuff that wasn't working, and I'm actually a bit happier with it. I was able to eliminate some unnecessary travel, give Steve and Maria more screen time together, flesh out an original character more than in the original draft, and still keep the ending I wanted. Except, well, there's two side-stories that I'm pondering adding, but I'm afraid it might be too much. Eh. I'll worry about it when I get to the epilogue.

Work tomorrow. Sigh. At least I'll be able to do some more plotting during my commute...
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